Victims

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       TITLE: “NEW ROCHELLE, NEW YORK 1985”

       EXT. CATERING HALL - NIGHT

       
       There are two ambulances in the parking lot.  TEENS exit 
       the prom and police officers usher the curious and upset 
       teens wearing prom dresses and tuxedos to their 
       limousines.  The situation is under control, yet activity 
       flourishes around them - officers, paramedics and 
       detectives work like carpenter ants among the lights in 
       the dark night.

       A COUPLE approaches an OFFICER.

                           TEEN BOY
                 What’s going on?

                           OFFICER
                 Move along please; everything is under 
                 control.

                           TEEN GIRL
                 Did anyone get hurt?

                           OFFICER
                 Keep moving please.  Thank you.

       The couple continues down the steps towards the limo.  

       The officer looks over his shoulder towards the 
       ambulances.

                           TEEN GIRL (O.S.)
                 I hear something happened to Toni 
                 Spresso.

       A SECOND OFFICER stands behind an ambulance.  We only see 
       his back. 

       DETECTIVE MAZZELLA watches PARAMEDICS lift the body of 
       the deceased, whose face and body is covered with a 
       sheet, into the ambulance.

                           PARAMEDIC
                 One DOA, sir?

                           DETECTIVE MAZZELLA
                 One DOA and one critical.

                           PARAMEDIC
                 Do you need an additional ambulance?

                           DETECTIVE MAZZELLA
                 No, the male victim sustained minor 
                 injuries; I’ll transport after 
                 questioning.

       The Paramedic returns to his patients.

       From behind, Detective Mazzella heads towards the SECOND 
       OFFICER.  The second officer hands a styrofoam cup to an 
       INDIVIDUAL, who wears a blanket and sits at the edge of 
       ambulance.

       Before the identities of SECOND OFFICER OR INDIVIDUAL are 
       revealed,

                                                            CUT TO:

       TITLE “TWO MONTHS EARLIER  - APRIL 1985”

       INT. NEW ROCHELLE HIGH SCHOOL BATHROOM - DAY

       TONI exits a stall wearing a busgirl uniform.  

       She bends and neatly folds her cheerleader uniform and 
       then places it into a backpack.  She walks to the mirror, 
       opens her purse and places a menagerie of make-up on the 
       mirror shelf.  She flips her hair and applies lipstick.  

       She puckers her lips, licks them seductively and raises 
       her brows.  She poses a sexy “fuck me” stare in the 
       mirror.

       EXT. JOHN’S CAR - DAY

       JOHN, 21, is driving.  His brother,COLE, 18,is the 
       passenger.  

       Cole holds a bouquet of flowers.

                           JOHN
                 Full scholarship.  She’ll be so proud.

                           COLE
                 She’s the one.  One year from now, 
                 she’ll be packing to head down to me.

                           JOHN
                 Then a big wedding, little kids.

                           COLE
                 You bet.  Four years is going to fly 
                 by real quick.

                           JOHN
                 Whatever you say.

                           COLE
                 What?  You don’t think, just cause 
                 we’re young, this won’t last?  I’m 
                 telling you, it will.

                           JOHN
                 I’m not saying anything.  Think what 
                 you want.

                           COLE
                 She’s perfect.

                           JOHN
                 Nobody’s perfect.

                           COLE
                 Perfect for me.

       

       INT. NEW ROCHELLE HIGH SCHOOL BATHROOM - DAY

       Toni reaches down her shirt and lifts each breast higher 
       into her bra to be sure her cleavage is showing.  She 
       sprays perfume on her neck, down her cleavage and in 
       between her legs.   She replaces the makeup to her purse.  
       She fluffs her hair, opens and slightly tightens her lips 
       and turns to exit the hallway in complete confidence.

       IN THE SMOKING SECTION

       GIRL in cheerleader uniform slaps SEAN across the face

                           GIRL
                 You were such a waste of my time!  You 
                 suck!  I am out of here, loser.  Let’s 
                 go girls.

       Toni enters as Girl exits with entourage.

                           TONI
                 What did I miss?

                           SEAN
                 Absolutely nothing. 

       Sean looks her body up and down.

                           SEAN
                     (continuing)
                  But I know what I’ve been missing.

                           TONI
                 The flavor of the week.

       EXT. NEW ROCHELLE HIGH SCHOOL PARKING LOT - DAY

       John and Cole pull into a space.

                           COLE
                 We’ll cut across the courtyard.  She 
                 has a free. She’s always there. By the 
                 way, thanks for the ride.

                           JOHN
                 That’s what brothers are for.

                           COLE
                 You coming?  

                           JOHN
                 Why not.  My interview’s not until 
                 four.

                           COLE
                 Mt. Vernon, Right?

                           JOHN
                 I think I have a great shot.

       John and Cole exit the car and head towards the 
       courtyard.

       INT. NEW ROCHELLE HIGH SCHOOL SMOKING SECTION - DAY

                           TONI
                 You missed my entire sophomore year 
                 when I had a crush on you.

       Sean moves closer.

                           SEAN
                 I like your outfit.

                           TONI
                 It’s a uniform.  Apparently, you’re 
                 tired of uniforms.

                           SEAN
                 Not that one.

                           TONI
                 You should have been looking at me 
                 over a year ago, when I was looking at 
                 you.

                           SEAN
                 What’s the difference?  Better late 
                 than never.

       Toni moves closer.

                           TONI
                 You want to know what you’ve been 
                 missing?

       Sean moves in to Toni.

                           SEAN
                 Definitely my loss.

                           TONI
                 Now that Louisa’s out of the picture.

       Toni seductively places her arms around Sean’s neck.

                           SEAN
                 Show me.

       Sean and Toni’s faces come together.  They begin to kiss.

       EXT. NEW ROCHELLE HIGH SCHOOL COURTYARD - DAY

       Cole stops short in disbelief.  He sees them kissing from 
       across the courtyard and turns abruptly to leave.

       John pauses a moment and realizes.

                           JOHN
                 Oh shit.

       John hurries to follow Cole.

       Toni breaks from the kiss.

                           TONI
                 Now you know.

                           SEAN
                 What?

                           TONI
                 What you’ll never have.

                           SEAN
                 You’re a tease.  The sooner you leave -

                           TONI
                 The happier I’ll be.  Bye, Loser.

       Toni exits.

                           TONI
                     (to herself)
                 Jerk.

       INT. JOHN’S CAR - DAY

       John turns the ignition and looks over to Cole.

                           COLE
                 Not a word.  Not one fucking word.

       Cole tosses the bouquet of flowers out the car window.

       EXT. NEW ROCHELLE HIGH SCHOOL - DAY

       Toni exits main lobby doors, practically skips to her car 
       and drives off.

       

       INT. PALAZZO ITALIANA RESTORANTE - DAY
       
       There are two dining rooms, the front is larger than the 
       back.  Tables are set with gold tablecloths for parties 
       of two to four or six.  A large window exposes low 
       shrubbery lit with tiny gold lights.  There is a partial 
       unobstructed view of the parking lot.

       BEA, late 40’s, enters.  She styles her hair in two 
       ponytails.  Her uniform is adorned with Mickey Mouse 
       pins, a name-tag and  she wears a Mickey Mouse watch.  
       She is bouncy, youthful, and energetic.

                           BEA
                 Did he see us?

                           CARLA
                 No, he went downstairs to get some 
                 cherries for the bar.

                           BEA
                 Did everyone sign the card?

                           CARLA
                 Everyone except Joe and Toni.

                           BEA
                 Is she on tonight?

       CARLA takes the cake out of the box.  Bea assists.

                           CARLA
                 She’s usually on Fridays.

       JOE enters from kitchen and puts bread in the breadbox.

                           CARLA
                 Who’s on with you?

                           JOE
                 Toni’s in the kitchen.  That cake 
                 looks great.

                           CARLA
                 Sign the card. Bea, go get everyone.

       Bea exits.

       Toni enters through the kitchen door tying her apron.

                           TONI
                 That thing is so gross.  Is that what 
                 we pitched in for?  It’s hairy.

       Joe hands her the card.

                           JOE
                 Sign.

                           CARLA
                 Yes.  That’s his gift.  Today he turns 
                 30, and he’s getting a spider.

       Carla puts the candles on the cake.

       ENTER Bea, HOSTESS, BOBBY the WAITER, JORDAN the COOK, 
       AND MANAGER

                           BOBBY
                 Light the candles.  I’ll get him.

       Carla and Joe light candles.

       Bobby enters bus station and calls to Victor.

                           BOBBY
                 Victor. Victor!

                           VICTOR
                 Yes.

                           BOBBY
                 Could you come help me for a second?

       VICTOR, 30, enters.  His pallor is evident.

                           BOBBY
                 I just need you for a minute in the 
                 back.

       Bobby and Victor enter the rear dining room.  ALL burst 
       out to sing “Happy Birthday”.

                           VICTOR
                 Wow.  Thanks guys.

       Victor blows out the candles.

                           VICTOR
                 Thank you! This is really nice. Thank 
                 you.

                           CARLA
                 Now, make a wish, and cut the cake.

                           BEA
                 This is from everyone.  We hope you 
                 like it.

                           VICTOR
                     (reading aloud from card)
                 We don’t like you cause you’re young 
                 and sturdy.  We dig you cause you’re 
                 old and dirty.

       Victor picks up fish tank.  Waves at tarantula with his 
       index finger.

                             VICTOR
                 Hello cutie-shit. I like him.  I used 
                 to have one of these.  They’re great.

                           JORDAN
                 Let’s cook him!

                           TONI
                 You’re gross.

                           VICTOR
                 Yes!  Tortellini alla Tarantula. 
                 Tonight’s special.

                           CARLA
                 Couldn’t be any worse than what you 
                 normally make.

                           JORDAN
                 I’m going to cook you too!

                           CARLA
                 I’d taste better.

                           VICTOR
                 Taste?  When?

                           CARLA
                 You’re an animal Victor.  You need a 
                 girlfriend.

       Carla exits into the kitchen.

       Jordan follows a few steps behind.

                           JORDAN
                 She needs an enema.

                           VICTOR
                 Go give it to her.

                           JORDAN
                 That tight bitch?

                           MANAGER
                 Great cake.  Happy birthday man.  I’ve 
                 got orders to make.

       He exits through the left dining room.  The telephone 
       rings.

                           HOSTESS
                 I got it.

       Hostess exits.

                           BEA
                 I’m glad you like it Victor.

                           VICTOR
                 I’m going to put him on top of my TV.

                           HOSTESS
                 (Calling from the bar.)  Bobby, your 
                 wife is on line one.

                           BOBBY
                 Ball and chain calls. Happy Birthday 
                 Vic.

       Bobby exits.

                           TONI
                 How will you get that thing home?  
                 Don’t you take the train?

                           VICTOR
                 I mostly drive.

                           TONI
                 Where do you live?

                           VICTOR
                 In Queens, Ozone Park.  I got an 
                 apartment.  It’s nice.

                           TONI
                 You drive from Queens to here 
                 everyday?  That’s pretty far for a 
                 bartending job.

                           VICTOR
                 I got a vending machine route.  It 
                 takes me up north, this way. My 
                 parents live in Mt. Vernon.  I go see 
                 them sometimes. It’s not a bad drive 
                 at all.

                           TONI
                 You have two jobs?

                           VICTOR
                 I get up around six and I deliver a 
                 few days a week - some schools, gas 
                 stations - I work here at night.

                           BEA
                 That’s why you look so tired all the 
                 time?

                           VICTOR
                 I hate these bags under my eyes.

                           TONI
                 I have make-up for that.  It’s for 
                 girls, but it will work on anyone.

                           VICTOR
                 Yeah?  Will you put a little on me?

                           TONI
                 I’ll get my bag.

       Toni exits.

                           VICTOR
                 (calls to Toni)  Meet me in the 
                 bathroom.  I’ll be right there.

       He takes one last bite of his cake and exits to the 
       bathroom.

       Joe and Bea are left to clear the cake dishes.  Bea puts 
       the tarantula on the breadbox.  Joe starts to put 
       breadbaskets and butter dishes on tables in the front 
       dining room.

       Bea is filling milk containers in the bus station.  She 
       notices Joe is in the front.

                           BEA
                 You got the front?

                           JOE
                 I got the front.  Toni has the back.

                           BEA
                 Too bad. Victor won’t be able to look 
                 at her.

                           JOE
                 She can take the front.

                           BEA
                 Let her take it.  It’s his birthday.

                           JOE
                 Whatever.  The back’s easier.  He 
                 makes excuses to go back there anyway.

                           BEA
                 That’s so cute.  Don’t you think?

                           JOE
                 I think it’s sick.  She’s got someone.

                           BEA
                 He doesn’t.  Maybe they can get 
                 together.

                           JOE
                 She’ll never be interested  He’s 
                 thirteen years older and he drinks.

                           BEA
                 It reminds me of being young and in 
                 love.

                           JOE
                 You are young, Bea.

                           BEA
                 You’re too good to me, Joe.  Besides, 
                 a good woman can cure a man of 
                 anything - even drinking.

                           JOE
                 That’s not her job, is it?

      


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